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Back To Back Freestyle (Dirty Jerz Diss)

Posted: Thu Oct 24, 2024 1:12 am
by KRyPT
Ayo….

Verse
Jerz is gay, now when I diss him they gon’ say it’s a hate~speech
So when I smack him, imma do it on his waist~cheeks
You in deep shit (how deep?) NIGGA WAY~DEEP!
(Can you further explain~please?) Bro, I’m talking waist~deep!
He’s getting fucked, I’m in his box like it’s for safe~keeps
Nah, I’m in ass, brother… and I’m talking face~deep!
Stop begging cause I won’t stop the pegging even if you say~please
I’m a straight~G, I don’t even separate my waste~streams

Outro
Back to back, I’m doing Drake~deeds
Even “Lord Knows” he can’t save~me

BARS!

Re: Back To Back Freestyle (Dirty Jerz Diss)

Posted: Thu Oct 24, 2024 1:15 am
by KRyPT
Metaphors 3.6/5
Similes: 4/5
Multis: 4.9/5
Bars: 4.773/5
Personals: 4/5
Overall: 3/5
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Re: Back To Back Freestyle (Dirty Jerz Diss)

Posted: Thu Oct 24, 2024 8:46 am
by ameilius
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Re: Back To Back Freestyle (Dirty Jerz Diss)

Posted: Thu Oct 24, 2024 3:19 pm
by Wraith
LOLOL

Re: Back To Back Freestyle (Dirty Jerz Diss)

Posted: Fri Nov 01, 2024 5:00 pm
by DirtyJerz
“Nah, I’m in ass, brother… and I’m talking face~deep!
Stop begging cause I won’t stop the pegging even if you say~please”

This was the part I knew I’d never recover from bruv.

Similes: 9.5/10
Metaphors: 9/11
Flow: 11/10
Personals: 23/10